Sea Creature

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NickB
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Sea Creature

Post by NickB »

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Driving your 4x4 to the recycling point
Powersaving ten glowing red standby lights
Switching to a zero carbon electricity tariff

You’re killing me by numbers.


Get out and smell the ozone
Is that the tangle of the isles
Or just old Mhairi’s sewage pipe?

Man, I’m wasted.


Out on the dark horizon
America’s last storm is heading our way
Bring on the wrack and tempest

I do well in storms.
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Re: Sea Creature

Post by Peter Connelly »

Nice one, Admin. I like your use of oppositions. And the idea of an unseen storm, or seaborne presence, heading in is both haunting and comforting at the same time. Cheers.
The owls are not what they seem.
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