In dreams of day

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shygirl78
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In dreams of day

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In dreams, there are no bills mercilessly dropping through the letter box. In dreams, there are no seagulls shattering the dark serenity of the night. In dreams there are no demons that break your heart or rip your soul in two. In dreams, you wander wild and free as the wind on an azure ocean of adventures with no approval needed or suffocating restrictions. In dreams, you paint your day with all the vibrant colours from the palette of your hearts desire and jewel your night with the most radiant of celestial gems. In those oh so sweet day dreams.
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Peter Connelly
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Re: In dreams of day

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Excellent, M: really like the line 'and jewel your night with the most radiant of celestial gems'.
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Thanks P :). Decided to post it after all and couldn't resist tweeking it a little further as I was typing it. Oh, I mucked up the Byron post with a silly typo, should have written 'groan'.
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