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Nutt job

Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:16 am
by nobody
Take a look they said
You are the expert – tell us stuff
We want to hear

'I think you got it wrong'
He told them. 'Time to rethink'.
‘Get out’ they shouted.

Re: Nutt job

Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:13 pm
by jimcee
It has always been my approach to poetry that a bit of rhyming makes for easy reading and continuity.
With the advent of this new fangled stuff where there are no rules about scansion or anything else, I have reluctantly gone along with the drift, if there was a discernable message therein.
But if the words have no relevance to anything in my comprehension and need to be explained, then I give up.

Re: Nutt job

Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 11:37 pm
by khartoumteddy
unusual but clear in its message

teddy :smashPC