Nutt job

As requested - a forum for people to post their prose, poetry, paintings etc. Use it or lose it!

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nobody
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Nutt job

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Take a look they said
You are the expert – tell us stuff
We want to hear

'I think you got it wrong'
He told them. 'Time to rethink'.
‘Get out’ they shouted.
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jimcee
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It has always been my approach to poetry that a bit of rhyming makes for easy reading and continuity.
With the advent of this new fangled stuff where there are no rules about scansion or anything else, I have reluctantly gone along with the drift, if there was a discernable message therein.
But if the words have no relevance to anything in my comprehension and need to be explained, then I give up.
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khartoumteddy
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unusual but clear in its message

teddy :smashPC
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